by lovely_shadow Sat Jun 06, 2015 10:04 am
Meghana Nelluri
This is a short story I wrote, part one of seven. I titled the entire piece 'Seven Deadly Sins'. I started with Greed. Any opinions? Oh, and a question. Please, what gender did you think that the main character was? Male or female? I don't mean to be offensive or anything, just curious.
I smirked at the pleading, sniveling man in front of me. He was another one of the petty peasants to bow before me, begging for money. They all had the same pathetic reasons- sickness, death, debt, food, family, the list went on and on. Day after day, they came, one by one. All requesting some of my money. As if I would share my riches with them. It was mine and nobody else’s. Once in a while, a person would come to implore that I lower the taxes. I would, of course, order the guards to through them in the dungeons with the rest of the idiots who had the same nerve. After, I would raise the payment even more. They would eventually learn their lesson, these poor, worthless souls. The money belonged to me. They weren't any of my concern. I snapped my fingers at my guard, pointing at the man whose eyes widened in horror. He knew that signal, that the guards would throw him out of my rich palace and eventually pillage his own house for anything of value. That was the punishment for anyone who dared to come after my gold. I slipped off of my thrown, which was made of the finest metals and jewels. I ordered one of the guards to carry me to my room, which was also lavishly decorated with the finest that money could buy. I laid down on my silk sheets. Tomorrow, I was to go around the town, entering the poor people’s houses to see if there was anything I could take. I allowed my eyes to flutter close, almost smiling in anticipation of all the money that would await me. The next morning, I dressed finely in a satin dress, decorating my head, arms, and neck with gold and diamonds. I commanded my guards to protect the palace, and not to permit anyone to take anything I strolled down the streets, wrinkling my nose at the filthy houses and people. I had already looted everything from this section. I walked further past them to a river with a bridge. Crossing it would lead me to more houses with the possibility of more money. As I was halfway across the bridge, a glint caught my eye. Something shiny was reflecting the light. That meant money. I dived into the water, not taking off anything. It was all mine, I wouldn't let go of it. I pushed myself downward, but no matter how hard I tried, I couldn't reach it. I swan for what felt like hours, but I still didn't get it. I was so close, it was right in my grasp, but when I did get to it, it disappeared. I looked around in surprise. It was like it was never there. I felt myself getting dizzy. I needed air. But as I attempted to swim up, something was holding me back. It was like I couldn't move, suspended in place. Mt chest and my head seemed to weight me down, feeling heavier. It was all of the jewelry I had on. I ignored it, continuing to move my self up. It didn't work. The only option I had was to take all of it off and then swim, but I couldn't do that. I wouldn’t. It was mine, all mine, and I refused to let go of it. Eventually, my arms got tired. I couldn't move, even if I changed my mind. The last thing I saw as I sunk further into the depths of the river was the light of the sun, glittering like gold.